dmic 2

This is our working its a tree diagram we WERE SO NOT CLOSE TO EVEN FINISHING anyways since we didn't finish we don't have a answer.

My peep hole naritive

 

Ch1. a dark presence





On one day a portal opened up in the sky and coming out of there was a black gooey void falling from it started to suck up all the joy and colour of everybody and when all the joy was sucked out of the people they were all moody and dark and of course they had no colour. A couple of days later a man named professor farts a

lot saw through his peephole on his lab door and what he saw was chaos so he decided to make a super human of colour to stop the dark and evil void he named it Roy.




Ch2. some good news and bad news

Weeks later he finished it but just when he finished it a evil void creature came in his lab and caught professor fart a lot after the void went off a kid found professors lab he looked and accidentally switched.

Today I worked with Luisa to fix my writing up she just red it but since I haven't finished there was nothing she could change. I haven't had enough time. Promise i'll finish it

My blood sugar reading task 2

Dmic 1

This is our dmic question and above that this was our working I tried thinking of another way but I couldn't think straight for some reasons and in the end we obviously we got it wrong. Hope next time we can get it right

task one reading blood sugar

Narritive writing plan for peek hole narrtive

Arthur Lydiard and Peter Snell comparison and incomparison

Writing narrative NOT FINISHED

Ch 1. A mysterious capture 

On one fine sunny day when everybody was enjoying themselves, in the avengers tower they were making jokes. Outside the avengers tower was a robber trying to steal money from a bank and captain america spotted the robber and he warned the avengers so they went outside to capture the robber but when they saw him he was already captured but no one saw who captured him. After a day all they could think or talk was about who captured the robber.

Ch 2. A helpful hand vs a vengeful destroyer

Well on one good side the avengers found the hero that captured the robber his name was Acer and his hero name was the onix he made these cool gadgets inspired from the avengers

Well they start fighting each other and the avengers get some more heroes to come along and they start beating the villain but then the bad guy sends more bad guys start coming and they start knocking out the heroes

deadlock comes up to one of the heroes but then that hero trips him and blasts him out of existence and then he gets this button thing that was in his pockets and presses it then it disables all the bad guys



They are not finished and some sentences are not 

My school journal task

My dmic

This is our dmic working I thought we were gonna be right but we were COMPLETELY WRONG no time to finish

My reading task

Hauora

Hauora is a Maori word that describes a person’s overall health and well-being. The four dimensions of hauora are often displayed as the four walls of a whare, which provides stability and strength.

The four dimensions are: Physical well-being or health,mental well-being,social well-being and spiritual well-being, these four dimensions can show a person's health. Mental and physical health can mean your overall health and the other ones I forgot what those mean.

In conclusion, Hauora is a Maori word that can show a person’s health and well-being. The four dimensions of hauora can be often displayed as the four walls of a whare. 
The reason why its so short is because I didn't get enough time.

My video for my task

My narrative plan

Dmic working

This is our dmic work and today sadly I think our answer a bit of right and a bit of wrong from how they were teaching us. I bet next time we can get the answer right FULLY this time.

My animation plan

My dictation writing

Hauora is a maori word that describes a person’s overall health and well-being. The four dimensions of hauora are often displayed as the four walls of a whare, which provides stability and strength. We did are dictation writing and this is it, and the blue is what I had to work on and the black is what I aready did.

My dmic

On Monday we did our dmic thing and this is it. In our group we are working on all trying our best and focusing. Tipelio put some useful information on as well. My goal is to keep getting the answer right.