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Friday, 18 September 2015

Shane and Jake the turtles.

Once upon a time there were two turtles. They were called Shane and Jake. They lived in the deep sea Jake and Shane are best friends there friendly and they're yellow and brown. One day Jake said" lets go and find a big treasure chest'. Then they saw a treasure map and they followed the Map and it was a long journey until they found it. they found x mark the spot. They dug and they found a big treasure chest and they shared it with family. The end.

2 comments:

  1. It sounds like you gave a lot of thought to your story Austin. I really like that Shane and Jake are good friends and do adventurous fun activities together

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  2. What a cool adventure Jake & Shane went on...and they sound like they're sharing & kind like you, to share their treasure with their family.

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