beginning
First are couch tells us the instructions then we needed to get a partner , My partner was Tj because he was my besets friend. We went to get our map. We started from the village then we went to follow our trail in our map Tj was following the directions and I was following him.
middle and end
We were marking are letters from the village bike track playground then the middle field we actually did course one and two. When we finished we came back to get a new map and the other people came to then it turned out that everybody got it wrong even us we got it wrong because we did course one and two even though we were supposed to do just course two but we didn't know. Then we went to get a new map hopefully we go it right this time. This time we went at the back of the pav and the village looking for L. After we went looking for J we went all around the school looking for J even though we didn’t know but we already marked it then we finished and came back and the session was done.
Son, watch your spelling and the very very long sentences. Though, it was good to sit down together and re-write this again at home.
ReplyDeleteI am so glad you took the time to revise this at home with Austin! Austin, whenever you revise and edit your work feel free to put up another Blog Post and just change the title to include "Revised" in front of the title. This will allow you to keep track of your progress as your revise and rework your writing.
DeleteThanks for the tip Ms Moala. We will do this :).
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