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Wednesday 15 November 2017

My narrative story.

in a cold arctic place, there lived an ice monster it had ice spikes on it’s back and it’s made out of snow. The monster was good although it was all alone, but One day a soldier discovered this monster and he decided to bring his army and hunt the monster down, but what they didn’t know was that the monster was innocent. Three days after preparing their army they attacked!.


                                         Ph2: the trouble
When the army got there they started shooting the monster the monster looked back and gasped one soldier said ‘’put your hands up you thing” but the ice monster ran away as fast as he could but it wasn’t enough. Soon a soldier had him then he shot, a bullet was heading straight for the monster but then the bullet just froze all of a sudden and the monster soon realized he had ice powers.He made a ice barrier in front of the army so the army couldn’t attack .


                                        Ph3: a new character

The ice monster ran to a place where there were lots of houses. The monster didn’t melt because it was still very cold over there. While the monster was walking a kid named Austin saw the monster Austin asked his mum if he could go outside and his mum said yes so Austin went outside to go see the monster. The monster was frightened from Austin when Austin walked in front of the monster, But suddenly a soldier found the monster and said”hands up!” the monster ran away


and Austin followed him but the kid and the monster but then a soldier went crazy and launched a nuclear missile.

                                           Ph:4 fixing the problem
His leader fired him because he was crazy, but  the ice monster made a proud decision. he used his ice powers to fly and he got into space and  froze the nuclear missile but sadly since he’s in space he froze with it. Austin really missed the ice monster, But, one day something fell from the sky and there was a monster inside. Austin said”could it be…….. ice monster.


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